2013年江西卷卷高考英语真题中的英语作文题是，你作为一名英语报刊的记者，对一次登山活动进行报道。作文题中已经给出了基本的要求，展现你作文分数高度的就是你对活动的评论了。下面让我们来看看优秀的范文是如何处理这些细节性的东西的。

1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);

2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。

注意： 1. 词数120左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!