It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment
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It's our duty to protect our environment. Where do we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is.
?;せ肪呈俏颐堑囊逦?。我们居住在哪里?地球。地球是我们唯一居住的地方,所以可想而知环境对于我们的重要性。
But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it.
但是现在,很多人都在破坏环境,比如砍伐树木,在公共墙壁上乱涂乱画,随地扔垃圾。如果我们继续这样下去是非??膳碌?。
Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.
现在,是人们保护环境的时候了,这是我们的义务,我们都要为改善环境做贡献,我们应该努力让我们的环境变得更好。
点评:作者多用学过的词语,不但保证了正确,还巩固了所学的知识,并且注意句型的多样化,如长句、短句、疑问句,使用了“if,so,now,but”等词,整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上,写文章就像串珠子,连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。
议论文常用的句型有:
1、论点:
Computer is important.
We must learn English well.
It's very important for us to...
In my opinion...
2、论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅、紧凑。如:
Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Lastly, ... Above all, ... 等。
3、结尾强调观点,最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点,如:
So we must...
So it's very important for us to...
I believe...
We should...