交真正的朋友

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on making true friends by commenting on the remark, “As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生对引言进行评论，就“交真正的朋友”这一话题展开论述。

2. 文章立意：朋友是我们生活中必不可少的人，但真正的朋友却甚少。人生得一知己足矣。因此，要交真正的朋友。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要评论引言，然后提出论点：要交真正的朋友。

2. 第二段通过排比论证的方式阐述何谓真正的朋友，明确如何交友。

3. 第三段指出，交友勿需多，需交那些诚实可靠之人作为真正的朋友。

参考范文

“As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones.” This remark implies that real friends are important to our life. 1 Therefore, we should make true friends. 2

True friends always help and learn from each other; 3 true friends are always loyal to each other; 3 true friends always keep a secret for each other; 3 true friends are always dependable and reliable; 3 true friends never take advantage of each other; 3 true friends may not share the same way of life, but they are likely to share the same way of thinking. 3 In a word, true friends are friends through thick and thin. 4

Everyone needs friends. We can share happiness and sorrows with our friends. When we are in trouble, we can turn to them. 5 It’s a pity that only true friends can do that. Just as an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 5 Since the number of friends may not be so important, we should make friends with those who are honest and reliable. 6

“随着我们长大，我们意识到，重要的不是朋友越多越好，而是要有真正的朋友。”这句话意味着真正的朋友对我们的一生很重要。因此，我们要交真正的朋友。

真正的朋友始终相互帮助，相互学习；真正的朋友彼此始终真诚相待；真正的朋友始终相互为对方保守秘密；真正的朋友始终值得依靠和信赖；真正的朋友从不相互利用；真正的朋友也许没有共同的生活方式，但可能有着共同的思考方式。总之，真正的朋友可以患难与共。

每个人都需要朋友。和朋友我们可以分享快乐与悲伤。当我们陷入麻烦，我们可以向他们求助。可惜的是只有真正的朋友才能做到这一点。就像老话所说的：“患难见真情”。朋友的数量未必重要，所以，我们应该交那些诚实可靠的朋友。

范文点评

1. 开篇引入引言，并揭示引言含义。

2. 首段末句提出文章论点：我们要交真正的朋友。

3. 用排比论证的方式阐述什么是真正的朋友。

4. 对上文论述进行总结。

5. 末段进一步阐述交真正朋友的重要意义。

6. 末句重申观点，结束全文。

要点用法

dependable adj. 可靠的；可信赖的

take advantage of 利用

reliable adj. 可靠的

through thick and thin 在任何情况下；不顾艰难

句法点评

1. As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones.

as引导时间状语从句，it为宾语从句中的形式主语，真正的主语是不定式to have more friends和to have real ones；宾语从句中less important和more important构成对照关系，共同充当宾语从句中的表语。

2. It’s a pity that only true friends can do that.

此句为主语从句句式：It’s+n. +that从句，主语从句句式的使用增加了文章句式的多样化。